THE HARE & THE TORTOISE was published around more than 2000 years by an ancient Greek aristocrat and philosopher named Aseop. It is a story about a hare wanting to race with a tortoise. At the end the tortoise won because the hare fell asleep. the moral is do not doubt on your opponents. I like this fable because I like the moral in this fable.
Hare fell asleep because he thinks that the tortoise is too slow. The tortoise tried his best to win but the hare was still sleeping. As the hare woke up the tortoise was almost in the finish line, the hare ran as fast as he can but the tortoise won the race.
I think that the report, the tortoise and the hare, is very good but the headline is a bit too long and the capitalization isn't the same as the big 'the'. andreasli.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteI think that your report is great... IOnly you need to make it longer... I think its to short....
ReplyDeleteThis is very good. But i think it's best for you to say what you don't like about it so then it will be longer...
ReplyDeletei like your review! it could be a little more detailed by putting more adjectives. But overall, it very good:)
ReplyDeleteNot bad...
ReplyDelete@ joy budiana: it is too short not to short and I disagree with you. It is not too short. Not all reviews should be long you know...
I think that this report is good but you could add more details to make it better. You could add more adjectives to make it more interesting and catch people's attention.
ReplyDeleteNice one, Emo!
IMPROVE YOUR GRAMMAR!
ReplyDeleteNice review Emo!!!
ReplyDeleteplease take the time to add details and more of your thoughts and opinions
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Add more details and adjectives to give your review more imagery.Check for run-on sentences and your tenses. It is a good review though... :D
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