A few weeks ago, three little pigs were almost eaten by a big bad wolf because the pig's mother told them to live by themselves. The pigs planned to build their house near a countryside. A neighbor who saw the tragedy said "I saw a wolf blowing the pig's house."
It all began when the pigs were finished building their houses. The wolf blew 2 of their houses away but the 2 had a chance to escape. As they went in the surviving brick house, the wolf tried to blow the brick house but he couldn't, he climbed the chimney. The wolf landed on fire. The pigs were so happy, one of their neighbor saw the whole thing. He called the police and the news reporters.
It is a very good article and very objective...
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Some parts to be corrected:
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but he couldn't, SO he climbed the chimney.
The pigs were so happy, one of their neighbor saw the whole thing. This sentence doesn't make any sense. Fix it, Emo.
Thx. Good article by the way.
fix run-on sentences
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Fix grammatical errors like pig's supposed to be pigs'. I agree with Kinta for the sentence that doesn't make sense. I suggest you split it to two sentences. So it should be: The pigs were so happy. One of their neighbors saw the whole thing and called the police and news reporters.
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